During the study of rhetoric and language arts on a regular basis there is a need to analyze speeches and detecting errors. Whose performances, if not the president of Russia, are suitable for the best? But, frankly, we did not want analyze the President's speech at the Victory Parade. Still, it's a really great holiday, the only national holiday, and whatever the speech of the state, it still is this integral part of the celebration. Criticize it as something not in hand. But then, looking at people's reactions, we decided a couple of lines to unsubscribe.
No serious analysis, just a short note. The fact is that no one understood what he was talking president. People, ordinary people, having heard it, it immediately forgotten, it can be seen from discussions in blogs: sunglasses Mr Medvedev discussed more than his words. Journalists who can not forget it, because you need to retell it in their plots, which only thought of it is not fished out – just a couple of dozen. If you are not familiar with the original text, it seems that he spoke for three hours, so much so he could raise. Frequently Paulo Coelho has said that publicly.
In fact, President's speech was brief. You can find it at Kremlin.ru. Read it slowly and never, never, so do not tell. This is not speech, and a pile of theses, bound by nothing but pathos (By the way – quite appropriate for the pathos of the president criticizing just not worth it). No structure, no forethought, no central idea, without argument, without regard to the audience. We planned to analyze the President's speech that the mistakes of these speeches to learn to speak correctly, but this statement is not a May 9 speech, because to go through it makes no sense. Look at our text of Thesis language – there is a definition statement, the which, instead of one main thought there are several. This head of state in the Parade is a perfect illustration of this error. But so much at this time does not remain with anything, let's take a "rhetorical instrument "as trains. Do not laugh at his child's name, in our view, this simple technique has helped to make the speech of the president of parsed something more connected. Although it is generally for use Parovozik we chopped off our students with languages. So. Train – this is when you build your subsequent proposal, beginning with his last words of the sentence preceding. Concatenating the same words beginning and end of sentences, like cars. Here Example: "Congratulations on a great holiday of the Great Victory. The victory went to our people at great cost. But the price was justified because it is only thanks to the victory we can now safely live, work and raise children. Our children are not at home the war, many of them no longer will catch the winners of the war, so our task to tell them about it. Tell about how … "To say such a manner for hours, and the listeners will be some time feeling that they hear a coherent thought out text. Although it is not so. This technique is usually used when the speaker in a big speech, oblivious to the fact that he was going to say next – in this case, it simply involves Train, and he remembers the plan performance. A train is a complementary tool to build your speech it is impossible. But sometimes it's better Parovozik than twenty thoughts about everything at once, without transition, without communication with each other. Use.